Good job for a 1st try :)
Well I loved this movie and thought it kicked ass but I have just a few suggestins
1#Have better looking text bubbles
2#Change the color of the text to a fav color of the speaker
3#Have a text skip button so u can skip a speach bubble
4#Dont state a fact more then ummm twice.....ya twice is good
5#Have stuffs happening in the background if your gonna have text have like a plane crashing or something ya know?
6#Give a background on whats happening like a scene showing how mario got to mobius EX. Warp Pipe
7#Text sorta kills a movie (im just learning) try to see if you can have voices or pictures to show whats happening Ex. Rotmk
8#Try to line up the animations perfect (youve done this perfectly just about)
9#Have some more humor going on Humer is what were alive for to laugh!
Now I dont wanna sound like an asshole about the tips I gave you I just want you to get the credit you deserve :D. ALSO a message to Bluntman420 Your an asshole! Just becuase a movie dosnt have blood and gore in a movie dosent make it bad! Also text is a very good way to get a movie started so if your one of them 3rd grade dropouts or failures get off this site and find a nice box to crawl and live in becuase this is the real world!(Back to my review) Great movie man just perfect what I said and youll have a great movie!I hope to see more from you cause your a good artist!